Crying Stars redux

Night

I decided to make this my secondary artblog and moved my public-thoughts-making-blog to http://senshuu.wordpress.com.

So, I'll start off with the last picture I worked on:






I'm told that there's too much going on behind the figures, and the moon is a bit distracting, too. More critique would be appreciated.
Edit, two years later: See a much better version here.